Submissive

An acrostic poem is a type of poetry where the first, last or other letters in a line spell out a particular word or phrase.

Submissive

Subservient passive compliance

Under hypnotic shaman charms

Began the instant soft whisperings

Migrated from your succulent lips

Infusing entwinings of misty bliss

Slowly engulfing my body and soul

Shrouding psyche in wondrous glow

Incredibly exciting every fibre hidden

Vibrating in tunes of sensual unison

Entrapping me within a mystical web

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Author's Note

The most common and simple form of an acrostic poem is where the first letters of each line spell out the word or phrase.

Reviews

[...]

What I like about you. Younalways make poem in diffirent style to bring something new. I like your theme for me Sacher Masoch's Venus in a furre it's one of the most important book what I read. This self give up in pleasure of pain and still feel love forward who hurt us. This book haunted me all my youth. This self discovery through the pain and pleasure. You poem have elegant style , I like that mystical Webb on the end. Cause world of pleasure and pain is still little bit mistical for me.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend - it is good when another poet gets something out of a write ... :-)

[...]

Yes I can say it's not happen often but it's does. I find still for me world of masochist very fascinating.

[barleygirl]

I used to love doing acrostics. Just did a few for the first time in a long time. I always love reading them. Your poem is interesting becuz you tell a story that illustrates the concept/title word. Usually I end up doing more of a definition of the word, but I like that yours goes further by show instead of tell. Nicely dramatic & intense, we definitely do not get the sensation that being submissive is a good thing *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[HeartDove]

Your'e poems always have a unique characteristic of using words to create an illusion, keep up the great job!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you very much - reviews such as this keep me writing - :-)

[drew garner]

This one I liked, quite a bit. The form was novel and genuinely interesting. And you seem to focus on a prose-like persona for your protagonist, all the while using some of the richest language I have read on this site.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Wow ... many thanks for your humbling review ... :-)

[Chris Shaw]

And yet another form. The acrostic I know of, but have not attempted. This form is an opportunity for you to get really creative with language and thought. You have done both here. Hypnotic, sensual, exciting,mystical,compliance, it's all there. You have certainly done wonders for the word submissive Phill. Something I don't know much about, I am far too bossy. Thank you for sharing your words and the wonderful photography.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Reciprocated thanks for your review ... bossy eh ... sometimes a good thing! :-)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

When all you can move are your lips and the rest is frozen under a spell- receiving , new life breathing- wonderful sensuous and magical🌹

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your words are most appreciated - thank you - :-)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done acrostic...i was too often the victim of these charms...and lost myself in them.
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks Jacob - glad you liked my write! :-)

[Ardra]

Phill... sometimes you go into this hot zone of passion.... :)
And what word heheh.... ;)
Love the connection with shaman and magic... my fav. Subjects... :p
The guy being submissive to her charms .....
I had tried once... with a word...E. told me some name I forgot...

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Glad you liked it - thanks for t review :-)

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oooh, this is so sexy and sultry!! I love it!! Only a potential grammatical error with the 's in "entwinings" which I believe should be plural? Otherwise, this definitely sizzles and arouses! Well done!!! (HOT!)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

thank you sooooooo much for this review - plus - well spotted the typo - will correct this instance :-)

[Alexa Apothic Red]

you're so welcome!