Enough

Enough

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Grinding down ....

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Enough



On and on and on

With your incessant moaning

Eroding patience


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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This is how I feel about the plentiful poems, all sounding similar, whining about love & heartbreak. Even when it's a piece of s**t in our lives . . . if we want to call ourselves artists, let's convey it artfully!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wink! wink!* (you conveyed this very artfully, by the way!) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very relatable! Excellent Haiku!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5/7/5, powerfully put. Packs a punch. Yep, enough is enough sometimes. My Dad used to say there are two types of people in the world, those who radiate, and those who are drains. You have just written about the drains.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i have known some people like this, and yet, patience with them does wear thin. They are never satisfied, always bored...and expecting us to entertain them.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and power-packed. Good one!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is how I feel about the plentiful poems, all sounding similar, whining about love & heartbreak. Even when it's a piece of s**t in our lives . . . if we want to call ourselves artists, let's convey it artfully!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *wink! wink!* (you conveyed this very artfully, by the way!) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) ......................... i had young children too! ;)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've got the 5/7/5 down tight. Nice haiku.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! The shortness is perfect, you found the best words to showcase an important topic! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enough is enough is enough

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol,i think half the world can relate to this write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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