Sweet Surrender

Sweet Surrender

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Giving in to passion ............

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Sweet Surrender



Eagerly submitting

To my goddess’s infusions

I await new mysteries

About to be discovered

Your tress strands

Of gossamer sensuality

Pulsate effortlessly

Throughout this deficient mortal

Captivating and filing

Each crevasse of my soul


Near unbearable

Is my heightened consciousness

To slow the tempo

Of approaching unbridled fervour

And to indulgingly linger

In playful secret passions

So extending the pleasures

Of our shared expressions

Embracing every second

Of our mutual existence


Sinuous soft gestures

From your talented touching

Detonate arousal

Contained within my psyche

And with sweet lithe whispers

Of oncoming bliss

My heart accelerates

In anticipation of surrender

As I am once more lost

To love’s glorious control


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Such a beautiful song of passion and love.... it's easy to give in....but only when they walk out it's difficult .... that's why always need to think before flowing with the passion.... :)
But I do agree brain stops working at some point of time....must be some chemicals at work isn't it.... I like the pic also...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :-)



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Spring is definitely rising, Phill; you'e giving in to passion with great warmth and aplomb. So stylish - that 30s picture, that decade's lunar curves.. and glorious words to accompany. Lost, no, not quite, but definitely on the way. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Your comments are most appreciated - big smiles & a hug to you ... :-)
What passionate words of love you have expressed here... Lots of feelings brought to life in the image you paint with your words... Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

So happy you enjoyed the read ... :-)
a mythical sensuality felt here.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Bless you friend ... :-)
This is beautiful, I love the feel of the poem. Keep doing what you do. :)
Kylie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

I will do my very best ... thanks for the kind review! :-)
Such a beautiful song of passion and love.... it's easy to give in....but only when they walk out it's difficult .... that's why always need to think before flowing with the passion.... :)
But I do agree brain stops working at some point of time....must be some chemicals at work isn't it.... I like the pic also...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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