Lava Lust

Passion overload ........

Lava Lust

Molten energy

Expelled through aching desire

For passionate love

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

I love your words, the intensity and the visual in the photo!! All come together to convey dark, vivid, tempting desire... passionate and perfect!

[Gee]

Would you Adam 'n' Eve it, a haiku with 'em in it. Clever

[emmajoy]

I really don't care for bright red apples! Haiku's interesting however.

[Fran Marie]

This haiku/ senyru comes together qute nicely...the photo of the apple and snake shows just how temping and strong desire can be..nice

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Boom- mind blown! Enough said- perfectly and passionately. Love this Phill my friend!

[Ardra]

lol.... nice poem...just don't like the pic :P (snakesss)
if you use a molten lava chocolate cup cake it would look more appealing to eyes lol.. ;) (to my eyes)

mmm reminds me of volcanic explosion inside the soul :P

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Chocolate snakes - now that's a novelty - thank you for your kind review.

[Einstein Noodle]

c'mon you two...chocolate snakes???ewwwwwwwwwwww says i!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Check out this link - they DO exist; https://morkeschocolates.com/chocolate-snake/

[Ardra]

Yuckyyyy ..Phill... i did not say both together... E. soemthings wrong with him lol (secret) lol
read moreYuckyyyy ..Phill... i did not say both together... E. soemthings wrong with him lol (secret) lol

or he was born in wrong country... pls. shift your base to china lol...

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha sorry Phil...i'm not biting ...ahahahahaha!

[Einstein Noodle]

sums it up in a coiled spring :) nice work with the metaphor and personifications .. and in a succinct haiku form .. a stimulating read for me! :)
E.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Wanted to also suggest an Adam & Eve connection ... Thanks for the review my friend! :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

well..its there all right...i didn't want to look to long at the pic for fear of falling ;)))