Most of my friends are dead now so they won't be joining me unless I go to them. I lost two to heart attacks, two to cancer, one to suicide and one to an accidental overdose. They were all cherished but I can't have them back. Treasure your friends while you have them.
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7 Years Ago
Thanks for reading and reviewing my write - you are so right - we must appreciate our friends while .. read moreThanks for reading and reviewing my write - you are so right - we must appreciate our friends while we can; least we turn around one day and find them gone. We have their memories in our heart to reflect upon ... :-)
This poignant senryu reminded me of friends who have passed over. Several lost to cancer. Years later and I treasure there memory and the good times. Lost in the prime of life.
I lost a Poet friend who misunderstood... that I needed time to
gather strength to catch up with personal obligations. I had no chance to explain
as I was misunderstood. To forgive and forget is often difficult. Pat
Friends, real friends, true and trusted friends are the sisters and brothers we never had.. or as some would say, the angels who decided we had enough love in our lives. (Young angels - them, who didn't know one can never have enough of it!) The space that absence leaves also leaves a mark that never quite disappears.
Your brief words have said so much more than..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your reflective review dear friend - nice to see you back :-)
7 Years Ago
Slow week away, days seemed longer, even the shorter evenings smiled. Mind calmer, more smiles - hop.. read moreSlow week away, days seemed longer, even the shorter evenings smiled. Mind calmer, more smiles - hopefully permanent. Thank you. :)
Most of my friends are dead now so they won't be joining me unless I go to them. I lost two to heart attacks, two to cancer, one to suicide and one to an accidental overdose. They were all cherished but I can't have them back. Treasure your friends while you have them.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thanks for reading and reviewing my write - you are so right - we must appreciate our friends while .. read moreThanks for reading and reviewing my write - you are so right - we must appreciate our friends while we can; least we turn around one day and find them gone. We have their memories in our heart to reflect upon ... :-)
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..