Ruin Vows

Ruin Vows

Broken promises

Chipping away on the heart

Damages true love

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017

Reviews

[Cassie]

Very true, you couldn't have said it better

[Mirror]

Well my friend, i read this piece when i needed the comfort, and it did comfort me. promises are like the cement mending walls of true love

[mae23]

Such power in such few words. Really beautiful

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for saying so .... :-)

[Gul]

This is the best example of "less words with huge meaning."

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you very much ..... :-)

[Ardra]

:) broken promises..
unsaid words..
no time for love..
guess end of the story :P

i enjoyed reading it and such cute pic

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks - glad you liked the pic as well ... :-)

[AYVID N]

They keep chipping, indeed. I liked it very much!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you very much ... :-)

[Patricia Wedel]

very clever photo and the Senyru is
penned with mystical sadness and remorse.
truly, Pat

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Pat - glad you liked it ... :-)

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with the sentiment of the senryu.....
and totally separately.....

the picture ignites a fiery picture of a thousand words....

j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your kind review .. :-)

[wordman]

and there is a lot of wood chips in the woods

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Yes there certainly is - thans for reading my share ... :-)

[Ted Kniffen]

So true, Phil. Nothing worse in love or business...promises are meant to be kept, otherwise we chip away at the foundation until the structure collapses.
Good write.
Tk

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks Ted - your words are most appreciated ... :-)