Final Straw

The last of a succession of irritations, incidents, remarks, etc., that leads to a loss of patience, a disaster, etc.

Final Straw

No more excuses

You’ve used up all your chances

Time for you to go

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Women need to hear this very important poem, before it's too late for them...perfect , poignant Senryu. I was in this place once. So tired, so depleted, so beaten down time and time again. God gave me the strength to stand up and say "No More!".As your poem and image show, it's incredibly hard to do and abuse can happen to anyone, anywhere. Thank you for writing this most relevant and empowering poem.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

God bless you Annette - I am humbled my write was relevant to you - thank you for being here! :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

...........:)!

[Ghost]

The words of death from a relationship.. Sad, heart wrenching words to shatter a life... Thanks for sharing

[AYVID N]

This is so poignant. The brighter side is that she has spoken up. She has exercised her right. A simple and powerful senryu!

[Nancy T. Words Move Me]

Period! It couldn't be any clearer. How many times have similar lines been spoken? In print, they make a big impact! For those folks fed up..leaving a cut out of this poem in sight, could help many break the ice.

[Mirror]

Dear....I have said that severally before "Please leave me alone...". What I hate there is the word "Alone". I always feel lonely once i sent the Jerks away. I therefore found a way to make it better. i now say, "Please leave me..." orrrrhhh "Just leave....!" Now, I am not alone in any way. Pffttt! :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your comments and reflective review my friend .. :-)

[Ardra]

Sometimes if life was as easy as just the poem says . .. :)

very nicely done Phill....

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks for your review - :-)

[Tony Jordan]

Such a straw can be 'paltry' in comparison to previous 'incidents' but hugely significant to their lives.
Good job Phill.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thanks - your review is much appreciated ... :-)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

As the father of girls I wouldn't have the patience for all that. I'm not that civilized. Nice Haiku.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your kind review - :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh yes, one too many slaps, one too many fists, one too many swollen hearts---the excuses used up----there is no logical reason for this.

such a pertinent, powerful write...
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend ... :-)

[Matthew Kult]

Deadly accurate

Familiar Read

Matthew