The Archer

Hou Yi, a mythical figure of Chinese origin;the Chinese deity of archery.

The Archer

When commanded by Jade Emperor

Each solar brother would take his turn

Encircling earth in living warmth

They were mischievous in nature

And so in spiteful disobedience

Together flew blisteringly the circuit

Suffering citizens viewed failing crops

Rivers flowed with boiling water

All fell to their knees in prayer

Hou Yi heard their sorrowful appeals

Thus taking arrow shot down nine

And left one all alone to witness

And so the earth was saved

By accomplished toxophilite’s bow

His name then honoured evermore

His archery skills become folk lore

The champion’s activity continued

By fighting off a cruel wind-monster

Later shot a malicious water spirit

Straight through its evil mystic eye

Making a truce by marring his daughter

Bravery was shared with modesty

His methods based on subtle tact

This legendary spirit of long-ago

Phillozofee @ 2017

Author's Note

Folk Lore ..........

Reviews

[Norman 223]

You have captured a style reminiscent of the troubadours of old, when folk lore could be introduced to illustrate the power of nature. Having spent some time in Australia, I have heard the tales of Aborigine Dreamtime conjure up a similar "explanation".
Loved the painting!

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Well done sound like old ancient legend . Words describe well our great hero.

[George Coombs]

Excellent writing Phil, I especially like the way that the concluding verse sums verything up so well. Great work and a great image

[Great Aunt Astri]

I must read up on this folk lore. It sounds very interesting. Your poem is simple but dramatic. Thank you for telling us this story.