Three Little Words
A Poem by
Phill Oz O'fee
How often I have seen this happen now a days ....
Three
Little Words
Three
little words
Make
immeasurable difference
Spinning
my emotions
Elation
to devastation
I
want you
I
need you
I
love you
I
don’t know
I
am sorry
I
reject you
Don't
look back
We
are finished
Saying
no more
Leave
me alone
Phillozofee @ 2017
© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee
Reviews
not that typical to speak highly of potent love, instead your work showcases being in the doldrums, addressing the complexities of love n love-based feelings n thinking n experiences. Good work. Varied meanings. Lovely n succinctly said. well done
Posted 7 Years Ago
True to life this little piece. Relationships don't always go the way we expect. Best to move on before it gets complicated. Nice work here!
Posted 7 Years Ago
True to life this little piece. Relationships don't always go the way we expect. Best to move on before it gets complicated. Nice work here!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
These three words...can cause measurable change in so many situations...lovely read!
Posted 7 Years Ago
These three words...can cause measurable change in so many situations...lovely read!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Bâtons et des pierres ...
7 Years Ago
I know right...😊
Oh 3 words. The decisively powerful combination. Much like this powerful poem. Beautiful read!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Oh 3 words. The decisively powerful combination. Much like this powerful poem. Beautiful read!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Contemplative and profound poem. "Three Little Words" can wield huge power. Pandora's Box or Russian Roulette- risky business, this....beginning, middle, end. "Elation to devastation"-great line. This poem well-says it all. Kudos!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Contemplative and profound poem. "Three Little Words" can wield huge power. Pandora's Box or Russian Roulette- risky business, this....beginning, middle, end. "Elation to devastation"-great line. This poem well-says it all. Kudos!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This creates such an inpact. The simplicity in it holds the golden key to the emotional world we all revolve around.... great work
Posted 7 Years Ago
This creates such an inpact. The simplicity in it holds the golden key to the emotional world we all revolve around.... great work
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow, what a great poem! It's not what I expected it to be, it was a surprise.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Wow, what a great poem! It's not what I expected it to be, it was a surprise.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
that's a lot of 3 little words :P
i was thinking of one maybe
Spinning my emotions
Elation to devastation..
words has a special power to make and break.. nicely done..
Posted 7 Years Ago
that's a lot of 3 little words :P
i was thinking of one maybe
Spinning my emotions
Elation to devastation..
words has a special power to make and break.. nicely done..
three words can mark the beginning, the middle and the end---
words can heal, words can do more damage...and words can undo what the heart longs for.
nicely done.
j.
Posted 7 Years Ago
three words can mark the beginning, the middle and the end---
words can heal, words can do more damage...and words can undo what the heart longs for.
nicely done.
j.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 9, 2017
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Phill Oz O'fee Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom
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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
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