Three Little Words

Three Little Words

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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How often I have seen this happen now a days ....

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Three Little Words




Three little words

Make immeasurable difference

Spinning my emotions

Elation to devastation


I want you

I need you

I love you


I don’t know

I am sorry

I reject you


Don't look back

We are finished

Saying no more

Leave me alone


Phillozofee @ 2017

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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not that typical to speak highly of potent love, instead your work showcases being in the doldrums, addressing the complexities of love n love-based feelings n thinking n experiences. Good work. Varied meanings. Lovely n succinctly said. well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


True to life this little piece. Relationships don't always go the way we expect. Best to move on before it gets complicated. Nice work here!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These three words...can cause measurable change in so many situations...lovely read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

7 Years Ago

Bâtons et des pierres ...
dipsy

7 Years Ago

I know right...😊
Oh 3 words. The decisively powerful combination. Much like this powerful poem. Beautiful read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Contemplative and profound poem. "Three Little Words" can wield huge power. Pandora's Box or Russian Roulette- risky business, this....beginning, middle, end. "Elation to devastation"-great line. This poem well-says it all. Kudos!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This creates such an inpact. The simplicity in it holds the golden key to the emotional world we all revolve around.... great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, what a great poem! It's not what I expected it to be, it was a surprise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's a lot of 3 little words :P
i was thinking of one maybe

Spinning my emotions
Elation to devastation..

words has a special power to make and break.. nicely done..

Posted 7 Years Ago


three words can mark the beginning, the middle and the end---
words can heal, words can do more damage...and words can undo what the heart longs for.

nicely done.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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