Aesthetics

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

A set of principles concerned with the nature and appreciation of beauty

Aesthetics

Exquisite canon

Magnifying life’s best sides

To rejoice splendour

Phillozofee @ 2017

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee

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barleygirl

Very thought-provoking . . . this is written in more of a "cerebral" way using words that conjure up thoughts more than images. Haiku style poetry is usually done in a more image-laden style, appealing to all the senses, & suggesting the idea you want to convey.

Example:
"Magnifying life's best sides"
could be:
"swirling dervishes surround"
(taken from your artwork)

I think your poem is fine & I like a poet that has a strong point of view. My ideas are just to keep in mind for future writings (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago

L.C. Jarrette

oh...it's a set of principles...

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

Canon as in like... A rule or set of books...? I think I understand this one... If I do... This is actually really deep... Dayum... Well penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 4, 2017
Last Updated on July 4, 2017

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..