Leaf
A Poem by
Phill Oz O'fee
The chief job of leaves is to make food for plants. This food-making activity, called photosynthesis, occurs mostly in fully grown leaves.
Leaf
Vascular
kitchen
Photosynthesising
food
For
both plant and man
Phillozofee
@ 2017
© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee
Reviews
Your writing is powerful and light, a delicate balance to master, beautiful work!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Superb originality and metaphor. And so it truly is a "vascular kitchen"-whaaat?- stunning concept! "Photosynthesis" silently and continuously blesses the world. Beautiful!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Superb originality and metaphor. And so it truly is a "vascular kitchen"-whaaat?- stunning concept! "Photosynthesis" silently and continuously blesses the world. Beautiful!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
what a cool senryu...
very creative...especially the first line.
Posted 7 Years Ago
what a cool senryu...
very creative...especially the first line.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Love your writing. So refined... a pleasure to read
Posted 7 Years Ago
Love your writing. So refined... a pleasure to read
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
...................... Clever. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
...................... Clever. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 16, 2017
Last Updated on June 16, 2017
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Phill Oz O'fee Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom
About
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s..
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