Clouds

In Haiku format .....

Clouds

Slaves for Anemoi

Sailing obediently

Salvaging moisture

@ Phillozofee 2017

Reviews

[Pete]

well said and beautiful. deep & powerful, sharp & biting ...

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I stand guilty of needing to look up "Anemoi" - thank you for inciting my learning of something new and fascinating! Powerful image and words putting clouds in a new light so to speak. A lyrical, mythological theme, most beautifully penned.

[Matilda 3000]

Simply beautiful. I'd never considered a cloud to be obedient before, but of course the wind is the master.

[emmajoy]

What brilliance! Nothing more to add except admiration.

( I love clouds )

[J. J. Nightingale]

Great Image !! wow...

I love Haiku..... ..

Perfection !!!

Did enjoy... .........Jazzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

fantastic haiku...love the alliteration---
salvaging moisture...like old ships searching for treasure...tears are a treasure...whether for sad memories or the happy tears of joy.