Laughter

Laughter

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Senryu format .....

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Laughter




The sweet sounds of joy

Effectively contagious

Uplifting spirits


@ Phillozofee 2017

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


Author's Note

Phill Oz O'fee
Laughter is a physical reaction in humans and some other species of primate, consisting typically of rhythmical, often audible contractions of the diaphragm and other parts of the respiratory system. It is a response to certain external or internal stimuli.

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laughter is the best expression of our face that travels direct from heart.
beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this one! Laughter is a wonderful thing in this world :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


The picture is fabulous for lifting the spirits. Have to say I did chuckle. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love it. Only suggestion is that "effectively" didn't quite fit for me. Maybe something more along the lines of "sweet" and "uplifting"?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet post :) I like! Isabella

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Effectively contagious" it is. I liked this senryu. Laughter seems like a good therapy at times. I use it to control my anger though mostly ;p
Nicely penned :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

7 Years Ago

Nu pari genul care să se înfurie
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Oh, dar eu sunt ;)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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