I say hello,you say goodbye

I say hello,you say goodbye

A Story by PEM
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He doesn't know he is dead

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So there i was standing in a harbor freight ,how did i get here? The last thing i remember i was standing at the door in a place i was standing once before. I could still hear your voice it sounded so close . I smiled and let go a little breath. you said "dear diary" and i watched you write "i love you." I still laugh at that even to this day. You were always the funny one , people say i am but i only repeated what you said. REmember that time in Glasgow? Who was that one chic that went with us? Your brother called again today. You know i never did get along with his new wife. Anywho ,,, im trying to sub in some facts in my stories and thought hey, no time like the present. right? Now to the story i was telling . Isle three picking up paper clips, somethings amiss this is a 1080p dream in HD,I'm going to attempt to pick up the entire isle then fly through the roof. but like the dream with the lion in the farmers field i was in slow motion why does that always happen ? I'm in charge i should be able to complete the imposable. That alarm has got to be the loudest ringing i have ever heard for god sakes will someone turn it off ! now it sounds muffled thats weird , well seems like someones dimming the lights .I SAY HELLO? I saw you at the funeral i'm sorry i made you cry you were beautiful as always. Ever since the fight we had things seem different it feels like things are changing. Why did you leave? Can you hear me? I SAY HELLO? You say goodbye.


© 2017 PEM


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This was a fantastic read!! :) I loved how jumbled the narrator's thoughts are, I'm simply fascinated by complicated character so thank you for that. :)

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