On The Edge.

On The Edge.

A Poem by Phillip Marshall

Everything's the same.

Having to deal with the pain.

If only it could stop.

I'm on the edge..

This time it's not glory.. but a suicide story..

© 2014 Phillip Marshall


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Phillip Marshall
I'm thinking to myself that I left this undone... I don't know... opinions?

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sometimes is short version best. so many words can destroy meaning and what you wanna try say. so i think is done. pain can make everthink so same and grey. special pain of the soul. somebody say suicede can stop pain. but nobody tell you what happen after death maybe can be worst. so i wish you have some love story now. have happy days

Posted 10 Years Ago


This could be a song! haha It's perfect. Maybe you could add another verse or too xD

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillip Marshall

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! c: I was actually thinking about just doing that.

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Hai there. I'm Phillip Marshall. I'm 13 and love to write. I want to get my poerty out and have people give me their opinions of it. I also love photography and video games. So yeah... I hope you guys.. more..

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