Over The Horizon

Over The Horizon

A Poem by Phillip Marshall

The atmosphere gleams.

The stars shine so bright.

Blue glare over the horizon.

The moment feels so right.

 

When the night ends.

The moon shrivels and dies.

But it will be here soon.

Because time really flies.

 

      By: Phillip Marshall   Jan/31/14.

© 2014 Phillip Marshall


Author's Note

Phillip Marshall
This was the first poem I ever wrote. Tell me if it's good or do I need to improve. I really like to hear others opinions if it's good or bad. Thanks for reading.

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Not bad at all :) definitely a lot better than my first. keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Phillip Marshall

10 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much! c:

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Hai there. I'm Phillip Marshall. I'm 13 and love to write. I want to get my poerty out and have people give me their opinions of it. I also love photography and video games. So yeah... I hope you guys.. more..

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