Auburn Kisses

Archway embraces , 

the vellichor floods.

Auburn kisses , brittle pages

Sand slows down.

Author's Note

Be harsh , with in reason please.

Reviews

[EnglishMajor55]

Your use of short words with long effects are fantastic. It seems like the two simple words per line (line one and two) should be easy and quick to say... yet it feels like it drags, adding on to the effects of longing. So much said with such few words!*