"Hero's"

A true account behind bars

We can be Hero's.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

When I received your friend request, I didn't just automatically check yes or no. I never do. I read the work of the person requesting and comment. I check out links to blogs and I found this one on today's post of your blog, which I like by the way. I also checked out your FB page. Well done. This is an excellent story and truth is penned here. I look forward to reading more of you.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

I really like the way its just some thoughts put to paper. Really intriguing, and very good, Thank You! :)

[Chris Yip]

Excellent stuff. Well written story in prison. So well told b'cos of the experience behind it. The human condition and mental struggles that one goes thru in prison with brief descriptions of it conditions. Good work!!

[Elwina]

Your story is told with simple words, short sentences, and I think that's what we need for some subjects, some feelings. This was ery adequate. It gives power to the read. Very vivid as well.
There is soul here, I liked it.

[Distant horizons]

Wow. Yet again, so much said in so few words. Raw honesty isn't always the most comfortable of writing, but done so well it leaves you thinking long after you finish reading, like here. great job.

[Francis Hagan]

A nice pithy piece of writing there. It has a sad elegiac tone which works well with the piece without being too sentimental. I also loved the end section where the narrator hints at the events which have filled up all those days in prison. As a list, it has a great terseness to it which allows the reader to imagine for him or her self what happen. Well done.

[Mathias Winters]

There seems to be something unexplained here. I'd like to know what it is. The story flows almost like poetry, which is very interesting. I really like the idea behind this, how you wanted to be a hero to someone, but I feel like there's no explanation of who the person you refer to at the end is. I think this is a really interesting subject, and if this is only part of a true account I would be interested in reading more.

[michael.c.m]

Well-writen. One thing that can never be taken from us is the concrete-and-steel knowing that we will always be our own heroes. We just have to decide, without equivocation, without hesitation, to make it so.

[Sabrina Claridge]

Very powerful and intriguing. I hope you continue to post stories about this.

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