autumn II

A Poem by Phibby Venable

the wind blew Autumn's dresses thin
a multitude of breathless whims
whirled through the sky in somesaults
leapt branches in high jumps and vaults
some trembled from the higher limbs
then fell in patchwork on the ground

© 2011 Phibby Venable

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SkinlessFrank

the danse of leaves caught up in a whirlwind, they blow up not down, defying gravity... a beautiful image

Posted 13 Years Ago

Samuel Dickens

This is an interesting take on autumn foliage. One that I've never heard before. A good one, for sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ed Hart

i new a girl named autumn once, she was just like that

Posted 13 Years Ago

Greg the Bard

This is great images in a very small work. I like this alot.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on October 20, 2011
Last Updated on October 20, 2011

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Phibby Venable

abingdon, VA

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http://youtu.be/25XE-BHGvWI http://youtu.be/B2klgDKMUq0 I live in the mountains of Southwest Virginia. Although my passion is poetry, I recently published a novel called, Women of the Round Tabl.. more..