haiti haiku

a simple thought.

Haiti Haiku

 

the beautiful wind

tried to blow a clean soft sand

past the smell of death

Reviews

[maryjaneuy]

nice haiku pf yours. i'm happy to read short but very meaningful works. and this is one of those. :)

[nostal]

Wow,
very nice haiku.
Also very sad.

[James Paulin]

A haiku is only 17 syllables. Sometimes to minimize is to trivialize. I believe you have made an insightful statement that is remarkably concise and poignant. Excellent!

[Gandré]

this is brilliance.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

So very sad. But somehow hopeful.

[cest la vie]

Painfully beautiful, Phibby...