guitar

guitar

A Poem by Phibby Venable

 

 

Guitar


song strings

laughing, striking, crying

sighing magical many things

Music!

Flatline

dead ground

halting , stopping, yielding

to the guitar's sound of dying

Gone.

Heaven!

God home

living, talking, telling

listening to a pure guitar.

Jesus.

 

© 2009 Phibby Venable


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Blondie is my love, she has beautiful curves and a long elegant neck that loves to be touched. I love to have her hanging around my neck or sitting on my knee. She has shared my bed so many nights and even mornings when we partied until dawn or rocked the night away. We make the sweetest music together and although she never goes anywhere without me, she has her own set of keys. If she gets a little high strung from time to time, I just just how to tune her down and her soft sounds are always soothing to my ears. Did I mention Blondie is my guitar? lol Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That was wonderful, very creative and inspirational... music is like life in many ways. love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


As Dylan said," And rest yourself 'neath the strength of strings. No voice can hope to hum."

An excellent write!
Jack

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this write
I found it inspiring in ways.
Very well written write.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Phibby Venable
Phibby Venable

abingdon, VA



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http://youtu.be/25XE-BHGvWI http://youtu.be/B2klgDKMUq0 I live in the mountains of Southwest Virginia. Although my passion is poetry, I recently published a novel called, Women of the Round Tabl.. more..

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