Pear

Pear

A Poem by Phibby Venable

Pear

yellow freckled skin
teeth kiss snap in a descent
into your whiteness

© 2009 Phibby Venable


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no im hungry lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is delightful. I definitely sense some sexuality in this work. Is it intended? If so, the one thing I think could be reconsidered in this poem is the use of the word "snap." It brings the teeth-kiss from something that graces the flesh of the pear to something that breaks a piece of it off, which, if you're being sexual in this, is not a nice image!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Phibby Venable
Phibby Venable

abingdon, VA



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http://youtu.be/25XE-BHGvWI http://youtu.be/B2klgDKMUq0 I live in the mountains of Southwest Virginia. Although my passion is poetry, I recently published a novel called, Women of the Round Tabl.. more..

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