Gray Bird on a Limb

Gray Bird on a Limb

A Poem by Phibby Venable

Gray Bird on a Limb
 
There is a gray bird on a limb
wrapped in some remembered thing.
Perhaps it is something simple.
An unsuccessful dive
that ended badly
or the open white face of the cat
that brushed too closely
as she searched the ground of grass.
Now she is hiding in the brown
of a half emptied tree
The rain that fell earlier
has rendered the leaves precarious
She is lost in thought and staring
at the bites of sun striking
her branches to break through.
After a bout of emptiness
& timid bruise
She remembers flight
and a heartbeat in wings.
She turns her head sharply
from side to side
She remembers something consoling
in the high blue of the sky.
 

© 2009 Phibby Venable


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you have the gift, and use it well...this is lovely poetry...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very multi-layered...a beautiful poem

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a parable of loss, the fear it engenders, and redemption--all with stunning imagery, and all achieved in a scant two-dozen lines. Head-shaking, jaw-dropping marvelous.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I feel a kinship with her. Every word evoked memories or feelings that seemed so familiar I could almost wrap myself in them. This is a beautiful piece of work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Phibby Venable
Phibby Venable

abingdon, VA



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http://youtu.be/25XE-BHGvWI http://youtu.be/B2klgDKMUq0 I live in the mountains of Southwest Virginia. Although my passion is poetry, I recently published a novel called, Women of the Round Tabl.. more..

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