Star Flight

Star Flight

The smooth black space of the sky
sparkling stars in miniature & design
Did you see my star fall in Nepal -
a burst of light in blue celebration
My eyes have written you a watchful letter
I am listening to ebony & starlight
There is nothing to worry about
but you fret the words and wonder
if I know the seriousness of things
I do. I am a person who swallows the moon
My heart beats in uppercase prompts
and rises in the majesty of storms
I hold my breath in listening
to the magnitude of insignificance
and I dance -
It seems the thing to do
My eyes so enamored with stars
My spirit breaking omnipotent with flight
through the naked trees
that try in vain
to border my life

Reviews

[Robin]

the magnificence of significance

[Ed Hart]

all creatures take flight (except those who stop to explain)...when you let fly like this, my heart beats in resonance...simply beautiful, my dear

[Donald Meikle]

woo the majick properties of insignificance
That free a soul to fly like this.

[Mauricio Montoya]

wow I like how this piece comes together, Ive always been intrigue by the stars in space, I know there is much more out there than we understand, I can relate to this write because I know were not alone and what part of this equation do I play.
Nice work.