This Mountain Stream Is A Promise Ring

This Mountain Stream Is A Promise Ring

I waver on the edge of fidelity
in a husk of cattails iced
leaning apart
Their spirit and spine fullness,
strain against the dark

This mountain stream engages
in a cool cerebral view
Leaf freckled ,soft mosses
meadowed crevices of ground

A promise rides the currents
that continues to rush through
Neither of us speaking
My fingers splashing blue

Reviews

[W.k.kortas]

The piece is, in terms of pacing, straight ahead as the river of life, but there is a certain playfulness in the scenery. That's a tough combination to pull off, but this is smooth as glass and utterly superb.

[Phibby Venable]

Thank you!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To give someone the world is the best way to show your commitment and the best way to do that is to enjoy its beauty with the one you love.

[Phibby Venable]

Very wise , as always! Thank you!