swan

the sky
is blue

with bird bones
on the floor
and a mother
flying in circles

and a swan

swimming in the pond

Reviews

[Neva Bryan]

This is a pretty poem. I particularly like the line: "floating past, playing the water like a fiddle."

One thing to remember is the difference between its and it's. Other than that, it's lovely.

[Emily B]

You've found your words. Lovely, lilting, floating kinds of words.