Change The Past

a poem i wrote at 1:28 in the morning :P

Open your eyes

Don’t even blink

Just take a minute

To relax and think

 

About everything you’ve done

And everything you’ve said

Take a deep breathe

And look deep inside your head

 

Is there anything wrong?

With the way that you live?

Is there something you’d take back?

Or anything you’d give?

 

If you only had one chance

To rewrite the wrongs

Would you move your entire life?

To where it belongs?

 

And could you start over?

Leaving everything behind

All your life experiences

And every thought in your mind

 

Before you give an answer

To the question I have asked

Make sure that you are ready

To forever change the past

Author's Note

i was tired :P it may not make alot of sense :)

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Actually, I loved this. The meaning is quite clear. I love how it rhymes and flows so well. Great work! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
And actually, your poem is what I think we all can relate to. I'm sure everyone has done something in the past that we could have changed. Even I think about my own past and wishing that i could have changed it..
I love the poem! =)

[shadow night]

wow thats real good. it was very stimulating it made me think a lot about the past and things that have happened and people around me and what not. im very inppressed with yor writings. keep up the good job and capturing reality as you do

[Dark Suga]

Loved the way it flowed. Was thought provoking. Conveys signs of maturity and responsibility. I think that you should continue to write, and write well. You seem to have alot to say and I think it would be worth hearing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Qutie easy to read, you leader the reader on a path with a final destination, it's a rare quality, well done, good read.

[Pi Cee]

Sense doesn't entirely matter when it comes to this. You have words, and they relate an idea. Perfect.

[Kat]

I liked it :) but the last stanza confused me... a little jusdt the line that said: to forever change the past.... but i understand:) i really like you writing :D