Story Of My Life

This is a poem i wrote about a relationship i had, its only somewhat accurate. :)

We once shared a sacred love

That some say would last forever

Deep down, we always knew

That we were meant to be together

The seasons would change

And the years would go by

Then I couldn’t help but notice

A look upon your eye

So we gazed at each other

And before you could speak

I knew what was coming

And began to feel weak

Then on that very day

The one I still regret

You told me something,

Something I’d never forget

“I don’t love you anymore”

Were the words that you said

My heart had stopped beating

And I lowered my head

As I pushed back the tears

And I gave my goodbyes

I knew in my heart

I couldn’t sever the ties

But after that day

you were really gone

And it was all up to me

To forget and move on

As the days turned into months

We began to grow apart

And you let someone else

Have the keys to your heart

And now I sit in my room

And think about before

To when I was what you needed

And all you would ask for...

Remember the sacred love

That people say we share?

Don’t ever listen to them

Because life just isn’t fair

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

have you noticed the shape of your poem?

random but hey another one involvong love...hmmm

I feel the pain.

one day last year when I thought i was madly in love with my soul mate I noticed a change in his behavior so i straight out asked him "You don't love me anymore do you?" and he said "No."

it was like my heart was ripped out of my body and trampled on!

i feel such pain reading this and those memories come flooding back into my mind.

but that was then and this is now, the past is gone, so start living for the future! love comes and goes! but hopefully one day when you find the one, you'll hold onto them forever.

[Pi Cee]

Maybe not fair, bu thappiness lurks in the sun, the rays of a rainbow, and a smile on a strangers face. The past is past, and the future is coming, eventually you'll realize why are why they are.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oh wow. Such despair this poem rings.. so sad. =(
It's very good. Very emotional!

[Kat]

Aw... I cried... I barely cry... that was... wow, that was sad but verrrrryy good. Awww...