Fall For Me

This poem is about falling in love :)

I see you when you’re not around

I smell you’re sent and hear your sound

And hope that each and every day

That you won’t ever push me away

Just lie with me beneath the moon

And get lost inside the nighttime tune

Now fall for me under the stars

And cure my deep and painful scars

Reviews

[Dark Suga]

One small change. I believe you should use "scent" as in the smell and not "sent" as in to go.

[Dark Suga]

Thanks for reviewing my work. I totally love this poem. It feels like its a friend you love and would love to hold onto. It sounds like an impassioned pled for the love and friendship of this person. It feel sincere and pure. Read like it was penned direct from your heart. I loved the sincerity of it. Good work.

[Pi Cee]

Love won't cure, but it can help forgetting the memory. Lovely write.