Spiral

I've lived so many lives in my head,

wandered many places that made no sense.

Stared at that same ceiling for countless

of times, eaten away by the years and regret

at the corners of my head.

The persistence of loss and all that could

have been, the many countless dreams that 

should have been.

I've tried to save myself but I always seem 

to slip away... 

Reviews

[Ritvi]

Felt the words. Sending you love.

[Ronald A. Dixon]

Wow! How sad. I wanted to reach out and give the author a big hug. Very well done!

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

such an emotional heart tugging read, I felt sadness ripple through, nicely done and expressed......

[m3lody mae]

such an emotional read, I like this. Very well written

[Pharos]

Thank you for reading!