Chemistry of Us

comebacks...

I never understood our chemistry 
or tried to figure out our history.
So I tried many things like geometry 
but can't solve even the equations.

I was on a conflict with my psychology

and got weak on my own physicality. 

The burden was like a heavy gravity 

that came crushing down with full force. 

But not even science could solve

every mystery, So I asked her personally...

"If your brain can't answer properly

just tell me how you feel in this tragedy.

If science or math can't solve your insanity

positive and negative both attract each other

that may answer you and give probability."

Wait, does that mean we need to even
defy newtons gravity?

"No silly, you followed the rules of gravity

properly. Both of us fell for each other madly

need I say more to answer you properly?"

There was no need for progression 

in my obvious answerable questions.

This was a natural reaction, 

not a rise in both our hormones. 

Maybe it was time to drop my speculation

for the answer was clear no need for observation.

"I love you too, enough with scientific questions"

Author's Note

pure nonsense and yet feelings are there.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am reminded of one of my favorite Beat poets, Robert Creeley...
especially because of the dialogue...but the sense of humor in this is great...and the rhyme scheme makes the poem sing...
i am also reminded of the song "Wonderful World" Herman's Hermits version or Sam Cooke's original
with your references to all the subjects and how the speaker tries to fit them into his feelings...and then gives up...and just lets the natural cut in.
j.

[Pharos]

Thank you for the review and for reading!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I love all types of poems, but I'm a sucker for a rhyming, love poem, and you got me here! I love it so much, it's so sweet and I love the consistency throughout.

[AmandaRios]

What a flow and such a smooth read. It shows the reader just how much the character was overthinking in such a fun way for reader. Very nice.

[Sapientiam]

This is certainly wonderful. I love how the main character can not explain his/her love, but can only say I love you as a simple statement with a mount of reasons. I don't believe this is nonsensical at all. Great job!

Also, is that Eren and Mikasa in the icon...? Very adorable!

[Pharos]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this and thank you. Also the characters in the picture are Shintarou and Ayano from Kagerou Project/Mekaku City Actors. :)

[Sapientiam]

You're welcome.

Wait, really? I love Kagerou Project! I guess the scarf messed me up... Still, very awesome!