Missing You

Going on everyday living life with no real enthusiasm,

In my heart there's a hole, a deep empty chasm.

I wile away the hours, waiting for you to return,

Waiting for thw love that set my soul on fire and made my heart burn.

I miss you so much, it hurts even to breathe,

My body cries for you, and I'm mentally bereaved.

Everyday, it becomes harder to stay sane,

Knowing that it was one more day I'd have to endue the pain.

Missing you is hard work for me,

As your presence is teased by my memories.

Tick Tock, as the time goes by,

Why can't I have you now, why?

Crying late at night, not knowing what to do,

Reading the stars, and whispering I miss you.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Tangerine]

Excellent, truly excellent. I love your writing!

[Mintwhiskers]

i think it was good was it ur first poem