Queen of Hearts

This is a poem that can be meant by females.

I can't stop loving you

No matter what you do

You make me feel like a queen

In your deck of cards

You could have got a Jack(a*s)

Or even a ace of hearts

You could have played or passed

Me like any other guy

Or even kept your ace of spades

You could have not played the game at all

Leaving me in the deck with everyone else

But you played me like I was your all

Like I said you make me feel like a queen

In your deck of cards

Abd it seems as if you have won the game

With your queen of hearts

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

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i think the use of cards could have been played stronger. i noticed the use of the ace of spades along with the obvious ones, but how about other cards, combos and their significance (examples: suicide jacks and kings; queen of diamonds; and a hand of aces and eights)? maybe you did not want to push the analogy that far? of course, i understand that short and sweet has a power onto its own. just some thoughts to snack on. great idea and good poem.