Addiction

I am addicted to your love

Like a glass of gin

 

I am addicted to your words

Like a sip of Hen

 

I am addicted ti your touch

Like a dentist is to teeth

 

I am addicted to your hold

Like a plant is to a seed

 

I am addicted to your hands

Like the sun is to Earth

 

I am addicted to you

Like a mother is to her child at birth

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[OceanTropic]

It was nice and I liked the images, like he holding hands and the earth and sun, I thought that was powerful.

A crackhead is addicted to crack cocaine, hence crack-head. If you want to keep the rhythm and the flow maybe you could change it to: Like a crackhead is to coke.

[Chad Halle]

interesting....i just wonder; what is a crackhead to weed? this line, compared to the others, brings confusion