Feelings

This is a poem desribing feeling that I had for someone.

My new Poem
Current mood: loved
Category: Writing and Poetry

 

Feelings

What are these feelings

The ones that im concealing

How are they unknown

Can everyone feel it

or is it just me being silly

I never felt this good

or maybe I should

not feel this way

But I dont care today

Because for the first time

I dont think my feelings are lying

I think that this is true

Its like I already knew

That u were the one for me

Because of these feelings

Really they show

The the love I behold

The truth untold

So I ask myself

What are these feelings

The ones that Im concealing

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Lexy]

The beginning, where the poem starts, sounds kind of childish, and I don't know why. You did a good job on it, though. Maybe it's just the word "silly"