My given name of origin had been long forgotten, so I will ask of you to please refer to me as Wolf. Not Wolfe or Wolfie, just Wolf like the mighty creature.
Prologue:
The Sayings of
a Wolf
Darkness slows upon us as a raging war makes this
world bleed. No human, no animal can survive their terrible hatred. Faster they
run this city into the ground. Faster they turn a heart into their toy. These
beings……these beings noteven meantto exist at all, but the dark aura that seeps
out gives them power to roam the earth without so much as a notice, that
is…..until they strike their target down with one fail swoop of their invisible
claws, making no chance to run away and save themselves. If I am to tell you
this chronicle then you must know the background of the compilation of people
to stop these livid beasts. First, I am acknowledged as Wolf in this world. My given
name of origin had been long forgotten, so I will ask of you to please refer to
me as Wolf. Not Wolfe or Wolfie, just Wolf like the mighty creature.
However if you want, I will tell you my name so I
can fully tell you this tale. My name is Danny Whistle and how I came upon the
organization is more than what one book could fit. So I will tell you all that
I experienced in this place. More so the subdivision of the White Wolves or so
they called it. My focus will be on all of them, but really on a young woman
who caught my curiosity. Her name is….Halloween. And her part in this….will be….more
than you will ever know…….
As a writer when I heard the character introduce himself, I was ready to roll my eyes and blah, but I realized something. Shoot, I like the character that's been introduced. And when a writer dares to open it up this way, that means the character must attract the reader fast. Danny or Wolf did and I want to read more. I like how you described the setting, a little background within a prologue, that's good.
Also, when a writer dares to open the book up this way, it must attract the reader quickly.
I think you did a wonderful job and I thought the name inverstions were kinda funny.
I actually can't wait to read more about this woman named Halloween. I never in my day heard a name like that. Makes it even more interestring.
lol, reviewing you hard is really hard. You are really good at making me, the reader experience the story, like a movie. I can't wait to read the next chapter in your book!
Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..