Until The Last Flake Falls

Until The Last Flake Falls

A Poem by Ellusive Rose
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A woman talks to her child on her death bed

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Until The Last Flake Falls

As you sit beside me

Smiling as best as you could

Holding my frail hands in yours

You say a prayer

In your sweet, gentle voice

Hesitating on every single word

As much as I wanted yo

I could not answer

To your silent pleas

I wanted to hold you

And say it would be alright

I can feel the tears

Streaming down your face

Drip Drop

As it falls onto mine

The snow continues

To fall

Making a blanket of white

That only you and me could have

Even though I cannot speak

Please let my heart

Reach yours

And hear it say

I will be with you

Until the last flake falls

© 2009 Ellusive Rose


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Ellusive Rose
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"And hear it say

I will be with you

Until the last flake falls"

Great wright!! The chosen words help the audience feel the emotion!! Keep up the Good Work!!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 8, 2009

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Ellusive Rose
Ellusive Rose

Valley Stream, NY



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Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..

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