Thoughts from beyond the door-Their Story

You have to read My Story before this one.

Sitting

Pondering

Wondering if you're alright

You probably think

That I've abandoned you

 

The phone calls you left

I didn't answer

Because I was so confused about

What to do

 

That hole in the wall

I could have used

But I was too scared to do so

 

These feelings that I harbor inside

I try to hide

Not wanting to hurt you

 

I know you're waiting for me

To come through that door

But I don't know if I can do it anymore

 

Maybe someday

Courage

Will be my name

And then we will see each other again

 

Thoughts from beyond the door

Their Story

Author's Note

Anything goes

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

A brilliant response! This is so lovely, and clever. What a sweet and unique idea to show two sides of the same story! I think it also makes a brilliant point- sometimes we're too afraid to make the first step. What a nice piece of writing!

[Soul Writer]

Awww...I'm gonna cry. This is such a perfect other side, I understand it perfectly, it fills the gap, it matches the other side to perfection. Matching pieces of a misunderstood puzzle...

Maybe you could change "I was confused" to "I was so confused", I think it would help it flow better. Just my opinion though. Oh, and "I've" in the third stanza should be "I" But...So beautiful.
I feel so sorry for this person...Even more than I do for the other...
Loved it.