Angel's Wings

Angel's Wings

A Poem by Ellusive Rose
"

A girl wishing for wings.

"

How I wish

Wish for angel wings

 

Pure white feathers

Neatly assorted

A grand collection

 

Long silver tips

Shining bright

In the light of God

 

Held close

As if it was life

 

Wind blowing freely

Feathers gently dancing

As they become one

 

 

To those with wings

Take flight into the sky

And spread your blessings

Upon the world

 

Oh how I wish

For angel wings

 

Angel Wings

© 2009 Ellusive Rose


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Ellusive Rose
Anything goes

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What a wonderful poem! I loved it! It made me wish that I had wings! It was very well written, greatly detailed, and very descriptive! Fantastic job! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, you really drew me into this and held my attention. It was very pure and it touched me.
One spelling mistake, "Whit" should be "White"
But other then that, I loved it.

Soul Writer

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on June 25, 2009
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Ellusive Rose
Ellusive Rose

Valley Stream, NY



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Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..

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