Rose

Rose

A Poem by Elisa
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A poem for The Phantom

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Hush Angel, for just this hour
and sink into my outstreched petals.
Red, of course, My Farthest Star
The color of each breath we take

Rest, My Love. Let this night pass,
may my soft tears fade your scars.
Thorns of mortals mar your wings, 
but our music waits in cool night breezes.

Sing, Brave One, and let me burn
with the searing ring of every note. 
Your rumbling voice within my ear
sends ice along my lower spine. 

Kiss, oh Shadow, kiss the strings
of your songbird's midnight reverie
whose heaven lives in your arms alone
as we fly towards the coming dawn. 

© 2015 Elisa


Author's Note

Elisa
A fanfiction poem written from the POV of Christine Daae to her Angel of Music. INspired by bensara91513 on Fanfiction.net. Thank you for your wonderful stories. I hope you guys enjoyed this one, and have an awesome day!
<3 Elisa

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Sweet and calm! Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Had this classic song feeling when I read that, beautiful work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I had "Music of the Night" playing in my head when I wrote this :D
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Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Brittney!
613

9 Years Ago

Sure thing!
Very nicely written Miss Elisa, I can feel the contemporary flow
In each if your words " thanks for sharing this wonderful petals of poem!;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I hope the meaning of it!
Well done!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks Emily!
very nice poem Elisa .loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nonu! You're so amazing. Thank you for always supporting me.
Harpreet kaur bajwara

9 Years Ago

i will b always with u. when u feel alone jst look at the gaps between ur fingers thats where mine f.. read more
Fabulous picturise poem here.
I love them, lovely creation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
What an awesome piece my friend! I will have to check that website out my :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :P
This is so calm and peaceful. Loved the serenity that flowed through the piece Elisa :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thanks :D I'm so glad you liked it
This is beautifully written, along running with the convincing voice.


lovely rose too :D



Posted 9 Years Ago


Elisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you :P

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Added on March 26, 2015
Last Updated on April 10, 2015
Tags: romance, fanfiction, love, seduction, phantom, angel, ghost, opera, music, night, darkness

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Elisa
Elisa

Los Angeles, CA



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