I really hope you enjoyed this one. In the past, I've found it really hard to write poems about my faith, but I feel amazing that I've finally been able to put it into words. Thanks for stopping by, and have a great day!
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"I walked through shadow,
through darkness that slithered into my soul,
through flames that scorched my rebellious spirit,
and now, as a singed heap of nothing"
Great vocabulary and amazing portrayal of thoughts through words! gud job!
This is a truly awesome piece Elisa! Your faith really shines through in this piece. You should be proud of your faith regardless of what anyone else in the world thinks... it's about you and your personal relationship with God :) I love this piece my friend!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words! They TRULY TRULY mean a lot to me!
No shame in having faith and being faithful to it! This is a lovely story, true and pure, of a person hiding from faith, thinking it is wrong, but then discovering that faith is not foe but a friend and it can be a spiritual guidance through life. Beautifully written!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
You are so right Nadia. Thank you so much for reading!
I don't trust people easily so I can understand what it feels to hide everything, but when you can trust someone it is just the best thing you can do. Love the poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
It's definitely such a release when you can finally tell someone how you feel without being afraid o.. read moreIt's definitely such a release when you can finally tell someone how you feel without being afraid of betrayal. It's super freeing. Thanks for reading :D
Never been one of faith , but I personaly believe that hope is something worth holding onto , because it the worst of times it seems to be the delusional side that gets you trough the worst s**t. I guess that could be faith ? I don't know. I liked your poem though !
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Yeah I totally get you. Whether you' see yourself as a spiritual person or not, everyone needs hope... read moreYeah I totally get you. Whether you' see yourself as a spiritual person or not, everyone needs hope. I'm glad you liked the poem! Thanks for reading!
This is such a heartfelt piece Elisa. I'm really glad that you shared this with me.
It was just a simple reminder for me, not when I lost my fiath, but when I have given it some time...
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Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I'M really glad you read it and enjoyed it :)
Hello everyone! I really appreciate you stopping by! I post new poems every Monday and Friday, so feel free to check them out and let me know what you think. Thank you so much, and have an awesome day.. more..