Painfully Grey

I have no idea

Escape will only find me in my tomb

I feel like I will never find it here

Kill me in the bright starlight of the moon

I’ll climb the stairway coming up from hell

Although those words I’ll never get to tell

My only hope lies in the stars above

The heavens want to keep me from their love

The black and white around me burn my eyes

I mix it up to form a calming grey

All while wishing for the pain to go away

Author's Note

I have no clue :P

Reviews

[crybabykylie]

the image is really nice maybe try to play with not rhyming..? still a awesome poem really like the line "i mix it up for a calming grey"

[Sin Nombre]

Wow! This poem is really good. I love the imagery i could actually imagine what was going on.
Suggestion though is that you can write a couple more lines to show off the emotion that is being displayed

[J.C]

That poem is really good, great job! I like the imagery you used. A suggestion would be to add a few lines to help depict the emotions