A controversial poem that will surely make people hate me, especially hardcore christians. I don't like church as an institution because it has strayed from its path a long time ago, teaching people to hate each other just because they are different and perhaps have some different beliefs. I don't want to be a part of that, so I have my own beliefs of being good and respectful in general, and if you don't like that, then you should probably know I don't care. But feel free to leave a hate comment if you are offended by my poem - that kind of stuff really amuses me, so I'd be thankful.
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I actually like this poem a lot. I agree with you about those who teach people to hate others just because of their beliefs. Although I am thoroughly christian, i believe this work makes sense. We can all believe whatever we want to believe and still live together in peace. Nice work here, keep it up :)
Pjesma nosi pouku o Bogu i zlu, svi se ratuju, žele, nezadovoljni su, a Isus nas je poučio da radimo obrnuto, da dijelimo ljubav!
"A war raged among these lands,
Religions clashed their thoughts"
Isus nas je poučio da nisu bitne razlike između nas, religije i rase, a sotona nas je promijenila, ljudi se međusobno ubijaju zbog religija i rase. Svi se nadamo da će nešto bit bolje, ali jedino to mi moramo zaustavit i loši ljudi se trebaju promijenit i utuvit neke stvari sebi u glavu, ali sotona nas sprječava. Istina, Isus je učinio sve za nas, očito da mi ljudi to ne poštujemo dovoljno, nego svatko hoće više, neki su zaboravili što znači ljubav, i to je žalosno.. Opet nevalja biti tako mračan, život je i tako "sucks".. Ova pjesma mi se sviđa, pjesničke slike su odlične! Svaka čast!
Ovo mi je jedna od najboljih mračnih pjesama koje sam pročitala!
I actually like this poem a lot. I agree with you about those who teach people to hate others just because of their beliefs. Although I am thoroughly christian, i believe this work makes sense. We can all believe whatever we want to believe and still live together in peace. Nice work here, keep it up :)