The Creature from Darkness

A poem about my evil pet! xD

A creature born of darkness pure,

A terror to its foes,

From its bite there is no cure,

Nothing to soothe your woes.

It moves as swiftly as a feather,

Stalking upon its prey,

Black eyes from the world so nether,

Holding your life in sway.

It may fool you cunningly,

With its furry paws,

And leave you frozen stunningly,

When you see sharp claws.

Run away if you value your life;

On it do not bet,

Or it will soon end in a strife,

With Luna the Evil Cat.

Author's Note

I wrote this in 10-15 minutes, so I know it's nothing special xD

Reviews

[Sabrina Fowl]

I love the end. Saying that it is a (i am assuming, domestic) cat is evil made me laugh. Every thing else put a wolf-like-bear-like image in my mind. Twists catch readers attentions, and are always fun!

I actually had a evil cat once. She would always stalk around as if she had a few to many mugs down at the bar. She always did the stupidest things....

[Simmirose]

jaja! I totally love this! When i was reading it I imagined a carpathian or a jungle cat , but it was amazing Great Job Tom!

[Morrigan Nicole]

Adorable sounds like my cat, the evil darling that she is. :)

[MoriartyMesa]

What I liked about this, is it took me right too http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMQgjZ4nwyQ this had that nice country roll to a heavy set of drums and rifts.

[Tabitha t]

what i like about this is the picture pf the cat. i thought of it as i read this and it gives it a bit of humor to it. I enjoyed this it made me smile. i dont know if that was your intention or if you wanted something more dark....but thats what i got and i liked it

[Starrbitt]

It has a creative perspective....actuallu its pretty good for 10-15 minutes.

[Angelic Surrender]

This is adorable! I love it :)

[Desmund Tiny]

it's really fun reading this.... I love it....

[luna11]

Luna the evil cat :D
The fact that your cat has my name made my grin.
Actually, the whole poem made me grin! It's so funny.
You make your cat sound extremely evil. I'm sure she's not that bad XD
Very well written poem.
x

[Destiny Crawford]

This is awesome :D lol "Evil cat". I can imagine. This is a truly great poem and it made me laugh :)

~Destiny