Unbound

A willpower & spirit oriented haiku.

Bodies shattered,

An apparent loss at sight,

But spirits - unbound!

Reviews

[Holly Soques]

Interesting little piece, this one... the message is quite intriguing, I thought, because most times it is precisely that which initially causes us physical discomfort or even pain that goes on to bring about change for the better.
Sometimes we just get so wrapped up in our day to day existence that we forget what is truly important. Isn't there that saying that we get so busy in life that we forget to actually live?

[R.A. Youngblood]

Lijep haiku! Stvarno mi se sviđa.... Poruka je jako zanimljiva, ima puno značenja u sebi :** Keeeeep it up :D

[She of Three Personalit..]

Oh this is so true! When we die or are killed, our bodies are shattered, and people mourn, but our spirits are unbound in our Lord, Jesus Christ!! This is amazing!!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I like your haiku about the will power and spirit. My best wishes. Haiku poems always emanating the word strength and powerful meaning. It will pave the path to human life into a living nature. My best wishes.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Another powerful poem. Ghosts rising from the dead bodies and at last free from their fleshly shells.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short to the point and well placed.

[SilentNiaAngel]

Short, simple & straight to the point!! Me like♥

[Kaylor Mason]

Death is a strange, strange thing. For the spirit, it's more a passage than a destruction. I like how simple and sparse this is, and yet it says so much.

[Lovely Soul]

Haikus are awesome ^-^ I like it

[Anonymous Me]

short, sweet, to the point. it's sad tho in its own happy way

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Interesting, quite different I like the twist of this.