This is beautiful. I love the wording, the rhythm, the cadence. This is incredibly well done! I really like the lines, "an infinite warmth/stargazers forever/a memory to mourn". Absolutely stunning use of language.
It's been a long, long time since I've read any of your writing, but I remember the doubtless talent exhibited in each piece before. This is indication that the talent is very much still there, and you consistently grow as a writer, poet, and human being.
Excellent piece!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Devon, for your beautiful words! I've been in a weird state of mind for the last couple o.. read moreThank you, Devon, for your beautiful words! I've been in a weird state of mind for the last couple of days (hence the poem), and your words literally made my day today. :)
It's been a really long time since I have visited this site. I wanted to close my account multiple times, but I just can't force myself to do it when I remember all the people I've met here and all the stories that they have shared through their writing. I can't really say I've returned for good, but I suppose the wind will carry me back from time to time!
This is beautiful. I love the wording, the rhythm, the cadence. This is incredibly well done! I really like the lines, "an infinite warmth/stargazers forever/a memory to mourn". Absolutely stunning use of language.
It's been a long, long time since I've read any of your writing, but I remember the doubtless talent exhibited in each piece before. This is indication that the talent is very much still there, and you consistently grow as a writer, poet, and human being.
Excellent piece!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Devon, for your beautiful words! I've been in a weird state of mind for the last couple o.. read moreThank you, Devon, for your beautiful words! I've been in a weird state of mind for the last couple of days (hence the poem), and your words literally made my day today. :)
It's been a really long time since I have visited this site. I wanted to close my account multiple times, but I just can't force myself to do it when I remember all the people I've met here and all the stories that they have shared through their writing. I can't really say I've returned for good, but I suppose the wind will carry me back from time to time!