Blissful Wishes

Blissful Wishes

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic
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We wish for a better world.

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We'd like to enter the world of acceptance,

Illusionary welfare to feed basic desire,

Mend the wounds with shameful repentance,

Obligatory tolerance which doesn't expire.


We'd like to accelerate the pace of our blood,

Exterminate the loneliness and reveal the heart,

Get up from the dirt to wash away the mud,

Open up the insides without falling apart.


We'd like to claim ownership over solid ground,

A pacifying place that welcomes with open arms,

Procrastinate out of warming comfort found,

Belong to a haven absent of alarms.


We'd like to pull the sleeves and do our own dishes,

Since we're sick of daydreaming instead of knitting fate,

Put in motion the creation of those blissful wishes,

And take the tools to bring down this new world's gate.

© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic


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Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
My 50th finished poem. Yay for me!
Thank you for reading.

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The world is now a training centre for hell. Here we are taught how to kill, slaughter and how to tolerate the pain and torture! We really do wish for a world as you described in your poem. A great job.
P.s. Congrats on finishing your 50th poem!:-):-):-D.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your awesome reviews!



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I really like the positive feel of the poem. Very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
this is sooooooooooooooooooooo gooood...!!!!
very very well done....!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Saumya

11 Years Ago

most welcome...!!!
:)
Very interesting poem. Very wishful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
If only your 'Blissfull Wishes' I could command....not. Nothing stopping me from saying how commendable this charming and brilliant write is..

I like your style.. :o)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :o)
brilliant with a touch of madness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Invisible

11 Years Ago

which seems strange for some reason, yet all to clear just the same.
Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

True.
Invisible

11 Years Ago

:) i think that fits here.
The world is now a training centre for hell. Here we are taught how to kill, slaughter and how to tolerate the pain and torture! We really do wish for a world as you described in your poem. A great job.
P.s. Congrats on finishing your 50th poem!:-):-):-D.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your awesome reviews!
what a get from reading this (now am 33 and only started to write so bear with me )
is that we have this world where we liked to be accepted not showing our real self
so if we could create are own world where we can have our blissfull wishes thank you for reading. a like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

would we have but the strength perchance to do so, happiness might we have. but alas, who knows what potential is there in finding such strength as to do more than simply seek it out. your words however strike the cords that bind us, so that we may see what it is we often ignore.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
MrOldFashioned

12 Years Ago

your are welcome my good sir.
This is really good... I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. Smooth rhymes and flawless conclusion. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

12 Years Ago

Thanks! It doesn't have many reviews because I'm not active lately, so people won't review my stuff .. read more
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

Haha I rarely get past my RR's but I'm glad I stumbled upon this. :)
Amazing poem, Tom! The way you cleanly and easily identify each of the wishes for you but without truly revealing anything to the outside, leaving us mystified. :)
Incredible write as usual! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

12 Years Ago

Thanks! :D

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Added on September 23, 2012
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Tomislav Petricevic
Tomislav Petricevic

Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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