Sunrise Phenomenon

The Sun burns

Echoes of yesterday's

Deceitful grace,

Blinding the sight

Of feeble eyes,

Casting them away

Into the lies

Of promised remembrance.

Author's Note

This is one of my "status poems" - freestyle poems I scribble down as a status on my Facebook wall.

Reviews

[Lonely Islander]

A great one for a status poem! Carry on this way and you will shine:-):-):-D.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thanks! :3

[Falling Leaf.]

Interesting. I quite like it. Not much to say 'cause there's nothing to fix :)

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thanks!