Amen!

Amen

 

I breathe in

the consumed breath

of people around me

and I renew myself

                                  again

                                                 and 

                                                           again

 

unknowingly

we become One 

                      to have and to hold

 

                                                   and nothing

                    

                                                                     in life or in death

           

                                                                                                can do us part

 

Reviews

[78Jon]

Nice little touch with the words sort of trickling down.

[Petra Vlah]

Ignorance and prejudice gets in the way of love, tolerance and understanding. Thank you Onku for your review

[Onku Ghosh]

All the human beings in this world are one.....whether the colour of their skin is black, brown or white.Jacob has rightly said 'a circle that is strong, is hard to break ......we need others and they need us"
Such lovely thoughts on unifying the whole human race........A wonderful write Petrah and the picture is so apt

[Sami Khalil]

A true universal message written by an excellent pen...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Petra Vlah]

Hopefully more people will come to realize how connected we really and unknowilgly are and how much we share this unverse of ours. Thank you Sami for stopping by and leaving a comment

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the circle effect.

friendship, love, with those we know, with those we don't---

a circle that is strong is hard to break...we need others and they need us.

but sometimes we insist on holding back on being reclusive...fearing friendship, mistrusting the hand that reaches toward us...

i guess this world today makes us that way, and that is a sad state of affairs...

but if only we could all join hands someday...wow.

i really like the layout of this piece as well as the insightful words you put together.

jacob

[Petra Vlah]

Whether we know it or not, whether we accepte it or not, we are inimately connected. Thank you Jacob for your kind words

[Rita L. Sev]

unknowingly
we become One...

We breath the same air, dream similar dreams, love in equal measure... we are united in so many ways, and this gives us life... Great poem!

[Petra Vlah]

Too often we ignore the connection that makes us ONE and chose to believe that some are better than others. Thank you Rita for reading and commenting