AWAKE

One of the pieces that was deleted, slightly reworked.

Now awake

to realize that

you've always

been asleep.

 

Bought all

that they sold

even at the

price of your

soul.

 

The truth is

a riddle wrapped

in a puzzle that

you can't solve.

 

Trapped in a box

that you would'nt

open if you could.

 

So you run away,

that's what you do

best.

 

But can't get away

from yourself now

that you're awake.

 

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

I think we all sit a ponder what we could have been, the worst thing you can do is run away from the truth. I try very hard to keep my head out of the sand...I dont know if it works though...This poem made me think alot, I really enjoyed it. thanks

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very powerful, telling words. I believe there is a lesson here. Thank you - very moving.
Light,
Siddartha